In continuation of our planning for our film noir short, we wanted to start developing our visual ideas, so beginning to create a storyboard was a logical step.
We had previously discussed wanting a scene to be set in the press office of the newspaper agency, but we had not finalised the specific ins and outs of what would happen in the scene itself. We supposed that drawing some initial ideas down might help us plan the content and structure of the scene better. We began to storyboard this scene in a freeform manner using Post-It Notes, so we could re-order shots as we went.
The shots read in chronological order from left-to-right. The shot details are as follows:
1. CU lit cigarette in ashtray on desk. Possible off-screen dialogue from the boss/editor.
2. mid shot of smartly-dressed Robyn (femme fatale), half-obscured by darkness, w/ back to camera and facing editor, who is completely obscured by darkness.
3. fragmented ECU of Robyn's face, talking or being talked to
3a. focus shift to Scott (protag) standing in doorway with two coffees. dressed semi-formally.
4. CU of coffee being placed on editor's table by Scott.
5. long tracking shot of Robyn leaving room, tracking backwards w/ focus on her. Leaves frame. Scott stands gormlessly looking out at her.

